(tears up.). "YOU HEARD HER!" As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. When Vanzilla pulled into the Loud Family driveway, Lori turned to her parents and said, "We're going to take our luggage up to our rooms. Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. No Such Luck, No Such Love (Fanfic) - TV Tropes I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. Lincoln finally got through to them, but he didn't feel happy about seeing them cry, he knew he was still partly to blame), Leni: (with a broken voice) "What have we done?! They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! I hate pageants! Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. Luna put. Rita: Honey! I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. We need it! The voice asked. Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? SEE YOU NEVER!" This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. Fade to the sisters all waking up from their nightmares. I-, Lincoln: "LYNN!" (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. You can never come back. The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. (Meanwhile, back on the beach, the family has gathered together, feeling very ashamed and humiliated. I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! How convenient for me. Lola: Hey, Lincoln! Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! (he goes to the living room window. Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Was the thought on her mind. ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." And after that, the whole room was silent. Loud House - FierceSquid276 - Wattpad Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! More information No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane More like this House Cartoon Cartoon Fan Cartoon Shows Loud House Alt endings Chapter 1: Butterfly effect alt ending, a loud ", Rita: "And this time, we'll let Lincoln decide what movie we'll watch. I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! Dont threaten your little sister! The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). Sell custom creations to people who love your style. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. But in hindsight, I guess I should've thought about it more before lying to you guys. Understood?!" ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). I tried to make it as comical as i could. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Look, I see sweaty footprints! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" I cant take a moment more of this! (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. We are no longer grounded to the room. "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). No Such Luck part 2. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. Lincoln: Shut up, you loud-mouthed dope! ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. As they leave, Jeffrey grabs Lynn Sr.'s arm, making him and his wife turn to him, he added, "And just so you know, your kids tore apart my lobby and the room you were staying in. But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! "you bad luck, Lincoln!" I feel like a fool! (breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. And Lori and Lisa. [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] The Loud House: No Such Luck (2 Alternate Endings) View source Ah yes, No Such Luck. Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. None of the kids wanted to talk to their parents and the parents didn't know what to say to their kids. I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!! Theres nothing lucky about it! We said we were sorry. # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. Lana said, glaring at her parents. Lola yelled. Slow down Lynn! divine001 on Tumblr I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! Lincoln: AND I NEVER, EVER WANT TO SEE YOU UNLUCKY PARASITES IN MY LIFE AGAIN!!! The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. We wont! Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. Lincoln asked his parents. ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! No Such Luck - Alternate ending - The Loud House Encyclopedia Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. Lock 'n' Loud / The Whole Picture. I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. But worse than that, I was being a horrible sister!" ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. I have failed as a human being. Where did you get the gall to talk to us like that!? Brawl in the family alt ending8. Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. You kicked me out of your lives, now I'm kicking you all out of mine!! Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Lincoln: "Oh really." Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? I was being selfish!. He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] Lola: Hey, Lincoln . "Is that so?" He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. Didn't you say you would never kick us out? This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! Literature. There's no need to shout. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. Lucy: Lincoln's right! I was stupid to believe in luck and to rely on it. You're all insane!!! Leni: Linky, dont shout. Theres no need to shout. ", Lincoln: (nervously) "Well, there is this new Ace Savvy movie that just came out, but I know none of you like Ace Savvy like I do. You love baseball. Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. We would never force you to go if you don't want to. *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. The family sees this and gasps in shock.). Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" Lincoln After Dark | The Loud House Fanon Wikia | Fandom And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! We don't need to get violent here. And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. SQUIRRELS WIN!" Luna blushed. I just hurt Lynn! Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! Lincoln: Stop it! I guess this proves it! Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. "Same here." Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! But seriously, we made a mess of everything! The Loud House: The Loud Luck (Rewrite) - DeviantArt Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. I pull off one little trick and you guys all flip out over some nonsense like a bunch of gullible buffoons! We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) - The Loud House Encyclopedia "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. Honest! [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] How can I help you?" "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." "Aren't you guys going to help us?" There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. So expect a bill in the mail." Hmm. Why did you kick me out of the house? Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) . Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! All of you!" And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. It's too broken, even for me! I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." Any bad luck? Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. "Her pudding is at least a hundred years old and will cause us all to go to the hospital for stomach pumping," Lisa added. (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). Luna: [Blushes] Really? The Louds. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. You all are really, really bad luck! Kick the . I will not be discarded and than used!! What kind of family would do this to one of their own? It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. (It cuts to the beach, Lincoln is in sunglasses and a hat.). He managed to, but with a twist. Anyway, here's my fanfiction. "Not cool, guys." Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. No Such Luck / Frog Wild. (Family begins to come around. No Such Luck Aftermath - Moving Out - The Loud House Fanon Wikia News flash; I live here!". +7 more. I certainly am not! "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" His choreography is so dated. This proves it. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. Lincoln: "Did anything bad happen, something life threatening that I would be deemed 'bad luck'? ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself. Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! Even Ronnie Anne was there too. Thats not how it works! Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? (Lisa turns to him) Whatever happened to Woman of Science, huh!?! Start talking. No Such Luck Alternate ending (Good) - DeviantArt The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). I don't need anyone! "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. It really doesn't. "EXCUSE ME???!!!" Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. (Inhales, then exhales) "I. Leni stared crying and the rest of them followed suit. What do you think, Pep? i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" ), Lincoln: But you know what!? This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. They knew their kids wouldn't like that but this was supposed to be a weekend for themselves, not the family, and the kids should've just accepted it and gone to Ruth's. Everyone awed over this.] Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. (facepalms. Lori: No, this is literally a terrible beach trip and I want to go home! Lisa responded with in her genius talk. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! She playfully rolled her eyes. So we've been in here trying to pass the time. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Angus: (surprised by the question) Oh my. Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. My own family, locking me out. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. We know you are!". Lucy walked towards him and they wrapped their arms around each other's shoulders. I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. Bad. ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? Lori finished with. I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! "Hotel security came up to the room?!" She pointed to the back row of seats. Trivia. (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). He flies over to her and onto her hand.) lincoln. And I HATE LEECHES!" Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. Now we've broken the shower." (Tears up) Our only bro. Cuts back to now. Trying explaining that!" She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? What kind of parents would do that? Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. I hate concerts! Uh-uh, I'm nothaving it. Yes." ", Luna: "No, you were right. (Cries) All my precious tiaras. ", (after a few seconds of silence, Lincoln smiles at them), Lincoln: "I forgive you." I'll just play softball all by myself! I hate that you don't love me anymore! BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. helluvaboss. ", Lincoln: "No. Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna. Luck. WE WERE NEVER PARENTS!!!! ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." . No self-insert oc this time. 5 months of research ruined. ", Baseball Announcer: "The windup, the pitch. As in, how ill knock your head over heels! Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. Youre our brother! "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) He brought the talkie down to his level and said into it, "Wait. Taking the device out of the girl's hand. Well just grin and bear it. Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Are you no longer grounded to the room?"